posted by
owlfish at 09:17pm on 23/08/2003
When I asked C. for help on how to edit this sentence so it would be more comprehensible, he told me to go write it down as proof that I'm an academic. So here you are:
"Edward Rosen, in his 1956 article, established the modern historical understanding of the development of the history of the invention of eyeglasses. "
The funny thing is, the sentence does correctly describe the situation. Alas, it's too compact to be lucid, and an example of how important editing is in order to improve text, especially when that text is from one of my early drafts.
"Edward Rosen, in his 1956 article, established the modern historical understanding of the development of the history of the invention of eyeglasses. "
The funny thing is, the sentence does correctly describe the situation. Alas, it's too compact to be lucid, and an example of how important editing is in order to improve text, especially when that text is from one of my early drafts.
(no subject)
You know you're an academic when...
reads is that this is the history of the history
of something: an odd concept for those of us
not in the History Racket.
/spectrum@ca.inter.net
P.S. I see that "blogging" now has an official
entry in the OED! (..and we all know what "OED"
means because we're all academic[ally minded
anyway])
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...the development of the history of the invention of...
*chuckle*
Makes wonderful sense, but you do need to read it twice forwards and once backwards before it falls into place...
HELP?!
respond here, or e-mail me at peregrine13820 at yahoo
Incidently, I found this doing a google search for the "title" and author name. You were hit three I think.
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The article's a little tedious unless you're really interested in all the gory details of the historiographic process. If you're willing to settle for a more widely available summary, Chiara Frugoni, in Books Banks Buttons and Other Medieval Inventions (2003) spends about 3 pages summarizing the important points and has a heft selection of pretty full color pictures to boot. I feel certain I've read another extensive summary of the article somewhere, but can't think where off the top of my head.
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Thank you for your help(and fast too!) if it occurs to you, I would love the assist! Thanks!
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A chapter of my dissertation is on eyeglasses, so I'm currently swimming in articles on their early history. I'm still trying to figure out where the other good summary was, but if you're interested in an article that picks holes in Edward Rosen's article, and therefore cites lots of bits of it along the way, Viator should be a much easier journal to get ahold of. On one hand, the article makes lots of good points along the way, on the other hand, I have to warn you, I don't believe the basic argument, especially since the author agrees that a certain amount of her argument is wishful thinking: Judith S. Neaman. "The Mystery of the Ghent Bird and the Invention of Spectacles." Viator: Medieval and Renaissance Studies. (1993) on pages 189-214.
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I already decided I didn't want to do gunpowder, as I am sure it's been done to death. but, anything on the other three?
lol. Seems like all the people I "meet" or "know" through LJ are from Canada.
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By the way, I figured out where the other summary of Rosen's article was, and it probably isn't of any help to you. A Spectacle of Spectacles: Exhibition Catalogue. (Edition Leipzig, 1988), put together by Carl-Zeiss-Stiftung Jena for a 1988-9 exhibition on the history of eyeglasses. One of the catalog essays has about a page of summary of the Rosen article.
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It's a freshman West Civ I course, so I'm not in a panic yet.
I'm back...
Thanks again for all your help! Mind if I add you to my friends list?
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Gerhard Dohrn-Van Rossum. The History of the Hour: Clocks and Modern Temporal Orders. Thomas Dunlap, trans. (Chicago and London: The University of Chicago Press, 1996).
Landes, David. Revolution in Time: Clocks and the Making of the Modern World. 2nd edition. (Cambridge, MA and London: the Belknap Press of Harvard University Press, 2000).
If you're really more interested in social impact, those two books deal with it extensively, and are recent enough to cover most bibliography, but you might also want to try
Humphrey, Chris, and W. M. Ormrod (eds.) Time in the Medieval World. (York, UK: York Medieval Press in association wiith the Boydell Press, 2001).
The Humphrey and Ormrod book is probably going to be much harder to get ahold of than the other two, which are in print on this side of the ocean, and both easy for the likes of us to buy and fairly frequent in libraries. It's a collection of essays, published in England, still pretty new, and pricy.
You're most welcome to add me to your friends list.
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thanks for the second opinion!