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posted by [personal profile] owlfish at 11:51am on 19/03/2008 under
If they had cures, long ago,
for burn, for plague, for polio,
for heart break and for dreams destroyed,
for starlust, and for inner void -

they could not all ensure that any
could live to four score years and ten. He
compassed space and earth and air,
a life full-lived with toil and flair.

They are not stars that do not burn,
though each collapses in their turn.
He still as star lights forth the way
with magic's prism, techne's sway.
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posted by [identity profile] edith-jones.livejournal.com at 02:23pm on 19/03/2008
Hey, not bad at all! Nice, actually, although I'm not too sure about stanza 2, line 2.
My sympathy on your loss. I've never read him, so I just briefly noted his passing.
-Edith.
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posted by [personal profile] owlfish at 09:43am on 20/03/2008
Even when I wrote it, I was thinking of stanza 2, line 2 as a Tom Lehrer rhyme.
 
posted by [identity profile] zephre.livejournal.com at 04:09pm on 19/03/2008
that's really lovely.
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posted by [personal profile] owlfish at 09:42am on 20/03/2008
Thank you.

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